The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful story--something to make us all think. How would I react?

The only thing I'd urge you to think about is finding a twist--this is very much like lots of post-rapture type stories. Is there some element you could add to make this piece stand out?

Good writing; you're especially good with dialogue.
Got your PM, but I don't know your "name" on the boards, so I'll respond here.

I'll be glad to critique your two stories, just give me a day or two. I'm writing exams over the next few days (I'm a high school teacher).