The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice twist! Sort of in the vein I was thinkin of going if I had written for the challenge although not through the perspective of a young boy. In my research I believe I discovered that real Christian baptism is a daily ongoing thing--something like your picture of Jesse having to catch up to what happened the moment he was immersed.
This is a really good way to view baptism and I enjoyed the way you presented this. Nicely written and clearly expressed.