The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting piece. Well-written and informative on a rare condition.
Our God is truly good! It is awesome to see the creativity in people's writing and the testimonies. Some pieces, like this, seem as though they have to be true! or very imaginative..
Wow! What an imaginative solution to this problem. I enjoyed the story and getting to know this character. Nicely done!
I loved this story. Many people have hydrophobia and just get baptised, but I have yet to hear of anyone being baptised in a wetsuit. I don't know whether the same cleansing symbol would be there as in most baptisms!
Really great MC in your story, and I love the way you described the Pastor's reactions :) Great piece!
Congratulations, Colin. In addition to your first place in beginners, your entry also placed 29th overall. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.
Encouraging story. I can see why it was a winner.