The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
A very thorough study, and I especially appreciated the charcoal analogy (note: briquette, not brisket).

I wonder if you're new--the formatting may have surprised you. An extra "enter" between paragraphs will space them out nicely, and you can "preview" before you hit "submit" to be sure that the paragraphs "took."

This reads like a great sermon!
10/22/07
This is a very detailed study and you've clearly done your research. You express your views clearly. Keep writing!