The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a cute story. Kids say the funniest things. This is a very clever "fellowship" entry. Very creative. Your writing and dialogue is fresh and clear. Great job!!!
10/19/07
Simply delightful! :)
10/20/07
I enjoyed your voice in this charming story.
10/23/07
I enjoyed the creativity of this piece. It was refreshing!
I figured this out, but this was sooooo fun to read.
10/23/07
Great hint. But what in the world is "koinia" or whatever? Loved the story, and couldn't wait to find out what it meant...but was disappointed when I didn't know what it meant either. lol. Very well written and kept my interest throughout. But then? Stumped. (smile)
10/23/07
Nicely done--succinct dialogue kept the story moving and showed typical child-like understanding of words. Very nice twist on the topic.
10/24/07
Definitely cute and fun - kids are ALWAYS great for a challenge entry. Bet this was fun to write.
10/24/07
Well, this is such a great little story! Very sweet and I love the way you gave examples of the child's past misunderstandings-so funny. I guessed, too, about the word, but it didn't matter because the dialogue and flow of the story kept me reading right along.
10/24/07
I could hear the child's voice growing more exasperated. Nice pacing. I knew what she was trying to say from the beginning but I still wanted to find out how mom would figure it out. This brought a smile to my morning.
Charming and fun. You did a great job with this.
This is well written and a delight to read.
10/25/07
A very pleasant read. Good job.