The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a cute story. Kids say the funniest things. This is a very clever "fellowship" entry. Very creative. Your writing and dialogue is fresh and clear. Great job!!!
Simply delightful! :)
I enjoyed your voice in this charming story.
I enjoyed the creativity of this piece. It was refreshing!
I figured this out, but this was sooooo fun to read.
Great hint. But what in the world is "koinia" or whatever? Loved the story, and couldn't wait to find out what it meant...but was disappointed when I didn't know what it meant either. lol. Very well written and kept my interest throughout. But then? Stumped. (smile)
Nicely done--succinct dialogue kept the story moving and showed typical child-like understanding of words. Very nice twist on the topic.
Definitely cute and fun - kids are ALWAYS great for a challenge entry. Bet this was fun to write.
Well, this is such a great little story! Very sweet and I love the way you gave examples of the child's past misunderstandings-so funny. I guessed, too, about the word, but it didn't matter because the dialogue and flow of the story kept me reading right along.
I could hear the child's voice growing more exasperated. Nice pacing. I knew what she was trying to say from the beginning but I still wanted to find out how mom would figure it out. This brought a smile to my morning.
Charming and fun. You did a great job with this.
This is well written and a delight to read.
A very pleasant read. Good job.