The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/07
I really, really like this! You put us right there in Shiloh with Joshua and the tabernacle. Great job! Hugs!! :-)
10/15/07
This was very good. Wish I could be there in Shiloh worshiping. What an experience! To merge the Old Testament with our experiences now would truly be a coveted experience!
Laury
10/15/07
I love this example from the Old Testament. Your title evokes such pleasant beauty. This sentence is so thought provoking, "True worship continues long after a song service has ended; it keeps walking and serving everyday and in every way. Worship, without serving, is like a cloud without rain." Nice work on this!
10/16/07
Very creative, an enjoyable read. You drew me in and put me with you in Shiloh. Good job!
10/16/07
You will NOT be in beginners for long. Your descriptions are beautiful and crisp. This moved me SO much. Thank you for writing it.
10/18/07
I love the title; it fits the story perfectly. I, too, like the sentence that was quoted by another reviewer. You have put me right into the scene with your descriptions and word images. This is a really good entry. Great job!