The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely poem! It's so easy to get caught up in the worries of the day. May we all remember to rest in God's clamness.
09/24/07
Very good extended metaphor.

Watch out for spelling (sane) and for irregular meter. Try keeping track of stressed and unstressed syllables, and establishing a consistent pattern.

This poem has some nice imagery--well done.
09/24/07
Lovely imagery. I enjoyed this!
09/25/07
Very nice! I like this line: "I should listen to those Proverbs and Psalms". I say that to myself, too. :) Good job - keep writing!
06/24/09
I love this and it's so true. What a great poem.