The Official Writing Challenge
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09/23/07
I would love to go there some day...this was a very nice piece, and I felt almost as if I had been there...

It's a good idea to eliminate exclamation points, except in dialogue (and not often even there). Your words choices convey your emotional content much more effectively, and readers don't feel as if they've been gently bopped on the head.

You're a good writer--keep it up.