The Official Writing Challenge
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You've zeroed in one the core of scripture, salvation through Jesus Christ. With a little polishing of the rhythm and spelling it will shine. Thank you. I enjoyed reading this poem.
09/15/07
Great message for everyone to read. Some editing is needed with capitalization and other minor things, but wonderful message!
09/16/07
Your first two lines are so true!

Although poets are free to be unconventional, I think this poem would improve if words like America, I, and Jesus Christ were capitalized.

Lots of great thoughts in this little verse.
Isa 35:5 Then the eyes <05869> of the blind <05787> shall be opened <06491> (8735), and the ears <0241> of the deaf <02795> shall be unstopped <06605> (8735).