The Official Writing Challenge
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You've zeroed in one the core of scripture, salvation through Jesus Christ. With a little polishing of the rhythm and spelling it will shine. Thank you. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Great message for everyone to read. Some editing is needed with capitalization and other minor things, but wonderful message!
Your first two lines are so true!

Although poets are free to be unconventional, I think this poem would improve if words like America, I, and Jesus Christ were capitalized.

Lots of great thoughts in this little verse.
Isa 35:5 Then the eyes <05869> of the blind <05787> shall be opened <06491> (8735), and the ears <0241> of the deaf <02795> shall be unstopped <06605> (8735).