The Official Writing Challenge
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You have captured the essence of our relationship with Christ. Walking and talking with Him is one of the joys of being a Christian. It is a wonderful reminder of just how much He loves us. Fantastic.
A powerful reminder of God's desire for fellowship with us. Very well written.
Love this. Such a relationship is unbelieveable to those who haven't experienced it. Inspirational account.
Great writing here! I felt drawn into the story. Be blessed.
What a beautiful and PERFECT analogy! You did a great job describing the garden -- you made me want to visit it right now :) I plan to keep these thoughts for when I have quiet times. Really nice work!
Just beautiful - the depiection of coming before our Father. After reading this, who could not want such a thing and come boldly into His presence. Great job!
This is beautiful, full of wonderful imagery. Maybe a winner?
Woo hoo Pamela!!! I logged on here as soon as time allowed ;) just so I could see how you did. 9th place! I'm so pleased, and dearly hope you are as well. You truly deserve it.
(Did I not read that right? oops...I'm still figuring all this out. Let's see what tonights post brings :) ).
Enthralling piece! You presented salvation/relationship with GOD in a way that even a child would understand. :-)