The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
This has a great message. I like your thoughts.

You may want to try a different format, it was a little hard to read, and the flow was a bit rough in places.

Great job.
09/03/07
Spoken from your heart I see! Great insight into what really goes on today. A agree, regular type, not caps, would make this easier to read. Great writing!
09/04/07
To the point, concise, and no holds barred. Very good. Formatting needs to be changed, though. If this was meant as an on-line chat room statement, perhaps caps would work. But, it does not carry the same feel in this type of setting.