The Official Writing Challenge
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This has a great message. I like your thoughts.

You may want to try a different format, it was a little hard to read, and the flow was a bit rough in places.

Great job.
Spoken from your heart I see! Great insight into what really goes on today. A agree, regular type, not caps, would make this easier to read. Great writing!
To the point, concise, and no holds barred. Very good. Formatting needs to be changed, though. If this was meant as an on-line chat room statement, perhaps caps would work. But, it does not carry the same feel in this type of setting.