The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
Some good metaphors here, and effective use of repetition.

If not for the title, though, I wouldn't have known that "it" was confusion. Maybe some imagery more specific to confusion would help?

Thanks for this poem!
08/25/07
Great images. This kept me breathless. I was very engrossed.
08/27/07
You have really personified confusion. Your entry caused me to think. Some favorite lines are
"What was born is now spreading
It acts like a virus
It infects all around it
It envelopes the remnants of order
It stamps it out

You have writing talent.