The Official Writing Challenge
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I am not sure I got exactly what you want to say. Perhaps it's just me.
I would have liked to have seen a little more of a lead in here, letting me know more where the thoughts were coming from. But I thought the "I believes" to be on target for what moms think as they hold that child the first time. There faith is blind faith, they do go forward because they believe in life.