The Official Writing Challenge
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I read this twice to make sure I caught all the symbolism and meanings. Wow. Very powerful. The excuses each gave was perfect for their name. Good job. Good writing. Congrats!
Goodness, you write very well. Your use of imagery truly pays homage to each one of the characters. So then, am I right correct in my assumption that the castle represents the condition of the unbeliever when sin has been allowed to run rampant? That having been stated: I thank God for Jesus!
Great descriptions in this piece. You write with a vivid choice of words.

This does need some punctuation polishing, but overall it is wonderfully written.
I love the image of the young creatures clinging to the underbelly of the parent! So many good descriptions of the emotional vices that grip our souls. Wonderful!
Very intersting use of feelings. I am not fond of the fanasy world, but this really held my attention! good writing here.
Excellent imagery and description. Great job, my friend!
I really loved this, Janice. Great imagery, vivid description, and powerful symbolism - as others have said. You've got what it takes...keep plugging away - you'll get there! Big hugs, Lynda