The Official Writing Challenge
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I read this twice to make sure I caught all the symbolism and meanings. Wow. Very powerful. The excuses each gave was perfect for their name. Good job. Good writing. Congrats!
08/13/07
Goodness, you write very well. Your use of imagery truly pays homage to each one of the characters. So then, am I right correct in my assumption that the castle represents the condition of the unbeliever when sin has been allowed to run rampant? That having been stated: I thank God for Jesus!
08/14/07
Great descriptions in this piece. You write with a vivid choice of words.

This does need some punctuation polishing, but overall it is wonderfully written.
08/15/07
I love the image of the young creatures clinging to the underbelly of the parent! So many good descriptions of the emotional vices that grip our souls. Wonderful!
08/15/07
Very intersting use of feelings. I am not fond of the fanasy world, but this really held my attention! good writing here.
08/15/07
Excellent imagery and description. Great job, my friend!
08/16/07
I really loved this, Janice. Great imagery, vivid description, and powerful symbolism - as others have said. You've got what it takes...keep plugging away - you'll get there! Big hugs, Lynda