The Official Writing Challenge
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Indeciviseness is often an associative of grief. And, as well, so is depression. Anger usually fuels both of these. More times than not, intervention is needed to help the individual find some much-needed relief.
How sad. My heart went out to Mavis. It was good to see that the minister didn't stop knocking, just like the Lord, tednerly rapping at our heart waiting for us to open the door so he can sup with us and heal us from our brokeness. How beautifully depicted. I was moved.
Thank you for your kind encouraging words for my entry, Winged Creatures and a Castle. God bless you and your writing. Keep it up-very good!
Your writing is very polished. I could feel all of the emotions your MC was experiencing. Very good entry!
I can identify with mavis. I have been in situations in my life that have provoked the same types of feelings, which you described well. thanks for sharing this piece.