The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.
Chris x
Jimmy certainly was very angry and you definitely showed us his POV. I am not sure why the shy girl's soft words turned his mood around, but I am glad they did. I like the poetic lines, too. Keep writing!
A very interesting mix of prose and poetry in this article. Good graphic description of anger in Jimmy!