The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/07
You have a good idea here and it is certainly something that fits the topic. My only suggestion might be to have done this from Joe's point of view. But you expressed your point of view clearly and your writing has promise. Nice work
08/17/07
Congratulations, Carolyn. Your entry has placed 16th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.