The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/07
You described the loneliness of clinical depression very well.

This jumped about a bit in time, which was slightly confusing. And you introduced a few elements that confused me (why is the dance studio important, for example?)

I'm glad you ended on a positive note. God is gracious.
08/06/07
Sometimes crying out is the only answer! Well told storyline here. A bit confusing in the middle but overall a very good story.