The Official Writing Challenge
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Your writing is very good! I enjoyed reading this story from beginning to end. The descriptions are very sharp and crisp. Good work!
Well-written descriptions in this piece. A few typos (cymbals, gaping) but overall it's fine.
Man, do you have such a way with wrods. I saw that you are an artist,so am I, unknown professionally speaking though,grin. Hon, you are an artist with words as well,take it from me. Your canvas of white is filled with color and emotion as they shine on the page. WOW! Keep up your writing as you are truly gifted by the Lord hon. Janice