The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this piece grammatically. Nothing stuck out for me. I 'might' have 'storytold' the account a little more, more sights, sounds etc. It was easy to connect with as it is , though.

I know what you mean in the last paragraph. I love your openness. ( :
This is a great devotional! you do a good job with the transparency and the descriptions here.
07/30/07
I enjoyed reading your devotional! Thanks for sharing it. :)
08/03/07
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