The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice! You have a good message in here!
Just a tip-Capitalize your "i" when just using "I" and add some spaces in between for easier reading. Don't forget to captalize the first letter of a word in a new sentence and add puncuation like, question marks, etc. This is good, it has a lot of potential!
07/28/07
Good thoughts expressed in your poem. Thanks!
07/28/07
I read this the first day it was out and its been stuck in my head ever since. Its a great thing to be reminded of...a challenge to all of us!! Thank you.
08/01/07
You have some excellent thoughts here. You expressed truths each of us must face - possibly soon.

If you could use spaces between your paragraphs, it would be easier to read.

I hope you keep writing.


This is so thought provoking. It realy makes one stop and think of what really is important and how we need to be proud of our Lord and Savior. Thank you so much for this touching piece. Other than some minor punctuation corrections this is very very good. God bless and please keep writing. You have poured your heart into this and I felt it as I read it. Thank you again. Janice+-