The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/07
Aww, this is a very moving story about true love and true happiness! It's good to know that God sees and loves us even though are souls may be torn and dirty.
07/20/07
(Oops! Sorry about the "are" instead of "our"-it's getting late!)
A lovely story with a good moral. I liked the fact that the child saw value in the doll and rescued it from the rubbish dump - the child had character. I loved the way the child could talk to the doll as her dearest confidante. Well done!
This is a touching story. I got just a little confused with the child and doll sharing the same name. Very enjoyable, however. Keep up the good work!