The Official Writing Challenge
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Heartbreaking that your story plays out way too often in real life and not only among teens. As ambassadors of hope we should begin each day with a prayer that Holy Spirit will help us be sensitive to that lost soul and that we will make time those He brings to us.
Wow - tore my heart out. Nice job conveying the emotion and angst of this situation.
Such a haunting story, and yet filled with an important message of the value of a friend. People of all ages need friends, and especially the young, the shy, the lonely. Very good entry, which could be excellent with a little editing here and there. Although sad, I enjoyed the read from beginning to end. Nice job!
I was taken back to High School through your story. You did a great job in conveying the emotions, the stress, and the lonliness of teens in school. Your ending paragraph tied well with your title, also.
Very impacting. I can see why it was highly commended.