The Official Writing Challenge
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The options you let the reader choose is an interesting idea. I had some trouble reading the print-out of your story, but the form is unique and you succeed in showing how different choices can change a person's experiences.
This has a lot of potential. It is a little confusing the way it reads. I think maybe if each scenario had been completed together it might have been easier to follow. Also, always remember to "review" your work before you submit. You can catch a lot of errors that way. The concept is good, keep writing.