The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/07
Cute. Liked the surprises.

A suggestion would be to make sure each time someone speaks, it is in a new paragraph.
Lovely account of two brothers and the birthday surprise.
06/14/07
A very enjoyable story, I enjoyed reading this it brought back memories of me and my sisters in my childhood.