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Topic: Write something suitable for CHILDREN (05/31/07)
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TITLE: The Why Bird | Previous Challenge Entry
By Pauline TAIT
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I've had to be corrected about spacing and punctuation, too, so I won't comment on that. :-)
Excellent story, with a very pertinent point made for us fathers - as well as appealing to ... older children?
Your story would be much easier to read if you started a new paragraph each time someone speaks. In the case of these cut and paste internet things - that means double space.