The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
Funny, funny voice, and I liked this domestic adventure a great deal.

The first sentence almost lost me, and the second paragraph (avoid using dictionary definitions)...but I'm very glad I hung in there, because this was delightful.
What a very clever thought! You are so right, sometimes looking in our own fridge or closet can be an adventure. Thanks for letting me know I am not alone.
Great job! I love this!Very humorous and you do have that Bombeck flavor to your writing. I was laughing as I am told by my hubby often enough, it's time to clean the frig again. But of course everyone else, who eats from the same heavily filled ice box run the other way when there is any mention of uncluttering or sanitizing our frig.Grin. God bless your gift! Keep up the good work and thank you for your kind and enouraging comment on my piece for Children's Genre. I won't totally give it away yet, but it's a story about a 4 legged creature that gets a bum rap and tells about his woes and is in beginners.:0)Take care-Janice