The Official Writing Challenge
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Josh and Kevin aren't the only ones who wondered what happened to the mysterious young woman they left on Brag Moor! :) I also wonder what was written on the scroll in her hand! Very suspenseful story! It also has a good message of obedience to God even when we don't understand everything that's happening and don't always see the results of our work!
Sounds like the makings of a much longer story--very intriguing.
Very good suspense - I also want to know what happened! Would have liked a bit more dialogue, but that may just be a personal preference. Nice job!
I wanted more. More details about the Bible Code, more about who he was, more about what happend. Very good writing, just not enough! Thanks.
Enjoyed the suspense and the descriptive language. Voice in the breeze, and the figure with hair blowing in the breeze. Great creativity!