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Wonderful example of how we view or future and accept the present.
05/25/07
I like the way you describe a marriage; growing and changing through the years.
05/25/07
Great view of marriage. I could completely relate.
05/28/07
Very good! I liked the acceptance of reality here. My favorite line:
"Weve had a quarter century to get to enjoy the things we dont think alike about."
Wonderful!

05/29/07
A realistic, not sugar-coated look at marriage, and that makes it special and romantc--simply because it expresses love with frank honesty. I like it, a lot.
Your use of repetition adds a lot to this poem. I can certainly relate to your message, as I'm sure most people can!
05/29/07
I could definitely relate to this. A great message.
05/30/07
I like the way the poem progresses, consider singing this with a guitar. Very nicely presented.
05/30/07
Boy, could I relate to this one!! Good job.
A great way to describe life's and marriage's turns.
Good poem!
05/30/07
"I set out on this road called life.
I knew how to get where I was going.
I just wasnt aware of the place it was really leading me to."

Like words set to music.

06/10/07
I really enjoyed this. I agree that the repetition works well here.