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I want to see the miracle with you...well pulled me completely in.
I can feel the need you have here to, once again, see a loving father as he was.
Sweet, sweet tribute filled with sadness. Easy to read and visualize. Wonderful.
I like this very much. There's a very sweet yearning here for a daughter to have her father restored. You expresses the emotion beautifully.
oops,since I can't edit her, that would be "expressed."
I give up...Since I can't edit here!
Heartfelt, heartwarming and so well written. This really touched me on so many levels. Blessings!
There's a beautiful lilt to this touching poem. Innovative meter, too. Well done.
Wow! This is awesomely written. This beautiful, lovely and VERY talented.

Wow, very nice.
Touching and sweet.
Two thumbs up. If I had a third thumb, it would be three.
Great job!
God bless.
WOW! Such a sweet tribute to a dear father! This is exceptionally welll-written!
I loved it too. I can relate so well and those of us who are caring, or have cared for a parent, know the emotions so beautifully written.
What a simple, sweet, heartfelt poem. Everyone can relate to this, from one angle or another. Thanks for putting your heart's whispered wish on paper. Super job.
This is a sweet and poignant poem. I can sense your sincerity and love the simple power of your great words.
Lovely and heartfelt. This touched me so much! Great job.
This is a sweet poem...
You really have a gift and a flair for poetry. This was a very touching poem. I look forward to hearing more from you.
Very sweet. :-) It makes me think of my mom and how she cared for my grandpa in his later days.
I love the hope and the love that shine through simple words so eloquently put together. Nice job!
Very touching.
Now I need a tissue. Heartfelt and poignant.
Knowing a little background on this makes it all the more beautiful and poignant. It's wonderful.