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05/18/07
AN interesting story - feels like the first installment of a longer piece. I'm slightly puzzled - are they sisters (share some DNA) or clones? I was expecting them to be sisters, but perhaps I missed something. A fun piece, thanks for sharing.
Very Unique science fiction story. Good work.
I had to read through a second time to confirm what I surmised - Lisa was the baby Alison was pregnant with when she disappeared.

Adding some dialogue between the grandparents might help your reader track plot and characters. The baby-rescue idea was a good common interest sparker. We all love the idea of being baby-savers.

Nice story!