The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
Clever piece. Good job.
05/11/07
I like this. We always hear Abraham's perspective of this story, and even Isaac's. It was a nice look at Sarah's POV.
05/15/07
I really enjoyed this story.
Great idea. Good job.
05/16/07
Interesting reading from Sara's perspective. The ending was clever.

Couple minor things -- you used Abram some and Abraham some, and about halfway down, Elizabeth referred to her husband as Abram. Some additional proofing would probably catch those -- and they're easy fixes.

Good conversation -- flows nicely. Nice job.
05/18/07
What a great blessing God gave to Abraham and Isaac but sometimes it just does pay to come back home! You would have thought that Sarah would have understood. Women! :)

God bless and keep writing.
I've always thought God knew what He was doing when He used a man for this job. As a mother, though I would have desired to obey, I don't think I would have been up to it. I liked the way you gave Sarah more contemporary dialogue. This would make a good drama for church.
This is a very good concept of what might have happened to Sarah at this time. Good story. A little comical, but then, we know the ending!