The Official Writing Challenge
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Creative, the title certainly got my attention.
Good job with the casual, conversational tone.

Be careful of overuse of exclamation points. It's almost always better to choose strong nouns and verbs--it's the difference between telling your reader what emotion to feel, and actually eliciting that emotion in them.

I'm guilty of not following most of those 13 points, and I'm sure my life would be far more relaxed if I did. Thank you.
Very nice job! I especially enjoyed the image of hugging a sunset. This is very nice.