The Official Writing Challenge
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A good lesson, and you exemplified it by writing a little piece with excellent focus.

Be careful of word endings; most of the time when you have "focus"--including in the title--you should have "focused." Also, avoid common expressions and find fresh ways to write those ideas.

None of those suggestions take away from your message: we absolutely need to not let anything take our focus off Christ.
You express your opinion clearly, and I agree. Nice work.