The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/07
I remember "hide and seek!" It's one of those childhood games that'll be around forever. Thanks for the memories.

I wonder if you'd think about tightening the analogy a bit. At times, you have "us" as being hiders, and at times as seekers. It might be more effective if there were a closer parallel to the actual game.

Good scriptural backing, and an engaging read.