The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm not big on poetry, so I don't normally read them, and if anything I tend to like traditional rhyming poetry. I think with free-form poetry anything goes, so the fact that you have some stanzas that have some rhyming and some that have none probably is okay, although I would have preferred a bit more rhyme, which seems to make poetry easier to read.

But, that being said, you have some very nice imagery in this entry. I encourage you to write more. Kudos to you!
04/28/07
Well written poem. I loved it.
04/30/07
Very moving. This simple poem said volumes. Very well done.