The Official Writing Challenge
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You portrayed a bitter/sweetness here with great writing skills. Good job.
04/27/07
Very believable characters, with the dialogue and descriptions of the characters matching beautifully. Enjoyed reading it!
04/27/07
Very good flowing story here. I really enjoyed reading it except for the wallpaper paste--yuck!LOL
04/30/07
Very cute banter between these two, but their affection shines brightly. Original and charming.