The Official Writing Challenge
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What an experience! Memories of camp are not all glorious. Good job.
04/22/07
Loved your story--still laughing! Good writing style!
04/22/07
Love the alliteration in your title--and your humorous re-telling of your nightmare!

04/22/07
Good story. My wife learned about chemistry one time too. She made a super clenser. Amonia and Clorox. While your chemistry was embarassing it wasn't a potential killer. The lessons of life always make good humor pieces. Keep on enjoying those moments.
04/24/07
Ha! I didn't know the effects of mixing toothpaste and cola, thanks for the heads up. A funny story well told. Great job!
04/24/07
Really good writing for this level. Got me smiling. Well done. yeggy
04/25/07
Does this come from experience? oh my!
04/25/07
You captured youth camp well here. The whole piece was funny but an added gem was the gum selling for possible missions. I grinned all the way through, well done.
Really funny story--well told! Are you sure you belong in beninners?
04/26/07
I’m glad he can’t see this health-hazard or he’ll settle for cheaper motels. -- That was a funny line. And I love the description of trying to brush your teeth with Coke. Ugh! Did this really happen? Blessings, Cheri