The Official Writing Challenge
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Super ending, I fell for it, too!
I really enjoyed this. The dialogue was well crafted and I could so see the boy dragging that log (I laughed out loud on that one). It ended nicely as well. Good job!
Kids learn quick. Sure did get it over on granny. (I really wonder if granny was fooled?) Good job.
I really thought this was a great entry. I agree you are a great story teller.
I LOVED THIS STORY! Well done. Those little ones are just so clever and so good at finding all the wrong things to do. I think you have a winner with this great story.
I read a book titled "Grandmother Sir." The author had a big bark and I suspect a cookie jar full of chocolat chip cookies. Perhaps your Granny was the author of the book I read...the story telling genetics are definately there. Keep writing.
This is a beauty, Esther. Wonderful characters and story telling. Loved the last line. As the mother of two adventurous boys I could definitely identify with the mum. yeggy