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What a sad account of someone missing. I would imagine this to be very hard on a wife and mother. Good story.
A very sad story, but very nicely told. You definitely kept my attention through the entire tale. Well done!
A sad and gripping story with a good structure and strong sence of place. Well done.
I tried to be more picky, all I saw was Maybe this is Montys promised letter, needs a full stop, not a comma. yeggy
Tender, sad, excellently written. Great story. God bless.
Great, fast-moving story. A winner in my opinion.
Excellently done. Sorry for your family's loss.
Absolutely fascinating and well-written. I am especially intrigued to know it is a true story. I was engaged from beginning to end!
Nicely orchestrated . . . great descriptions, captivating storyline. A well-told tale; all the more entertaining knowing it's true. Blessings!
This sad story is told excellently. You kept my attention beginning to end.
Sad, but so well told! Great writing!
Ah, a true account, a true mystery. this was written so well, it should not be in beginners! I did wish for the mystery to be solved, though! I bet you do too.
The fact that it was real made it all the better. Very nice job.
Such a sad story, but so well written. Good job!