The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/07
I'm not entirely sure what was going on here, but you definitely held my interest. The overall feeling was fear for the narrator, until the end when it seemed that he or she had already triumphed over the man with the gun. I'd love to read more of this
Very different piece on music. I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for the narrator or glad that he got what he deserved. Good writing.