The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/07
This is a great affirmation of your identity in the Lord, and your desire to sing to His glory.
I think it would be more effective if the words were not all capital letters, and if the sentences were more traditionally constructed. But you conveyed your desire to praise Him and I can say AMEN! to that.
03/19/07
A very passionate message. I would love to see this broken up into individual sentences and paragraphs, but I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
Very passionate message. It was unfortunate that the spelling errors took away from the overall piece. A little tweaking would make this a wonderful testimony of your faith.