The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/07
It is so sad to see children begging and it is a reminder that God still has work for us to do. Keep writing!
03/11/07
So heartbreaking! We are priveleged indeed! Keep writing.
03/12/07
You are so right. We live in such a blessed country and time. Very well written. Short and to the point. You could have expanded it with the other pilgram's feelings, the father's interaction, whether he received a dollar or not. They would have been nice to hear but the main lesson/message may have been diluted. God bless and keep writing.