The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice - were you talking about what Jesus has done for us? I thought you were. Good dialogue and expession.
Nice new take on this age-old story of the garment of salvation.
Thank you. God bless. Keep on writing!
Thanks for this parable. It helps us understand the amazing deal we got after searching in all the wrong places. I was confused at first by the "shades." I thought you were shopping for sunglasses! Also, an easy fix that, once learned, is easy to remember. Put your periods and commas INSIDE the quotation marks.

You've got a very creative entry here, and it makes a complex concept crystal clear. You must be a writer! Keep it up!
We have so many choices. Making the right one is so difficult, but you've managed to pass your message on in a very unique way.
Priceless! Fantabulous entry! Couldn't have said it better myself. What a beautiful thought! Double Kudos for a job well done!
A nice little modernized parable. I enjoyed this, and it is easy to relate to. Good work