The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
Very touching!

There was a switch in POV early on, and I wish we had gotten to know Karin better--I was unclear on her disability, her age, and how she led her trainer to Christ.

On the other hand, we really got to know your main character very well, and he was a very interesting character. A compelling read that I enjoyed a lot.
02/23/07
A wonderful story and I really enjoyed reading this. What a wonderful way to lead someone to the Lord; just by being yourself and showing the peace that the Lord gives. I liked this very much. Nice work
I could feel Joe's aloofness to society here. And yet you left the reader feeling he was not at all happy that he felt that way. Good job.
03/15/07
The quiet strength of those who are stronger inside often shines through and those whose eyes are open will see it.

Good flow and development. Would have liked to see more of the girl's character developed but realize the word limit.

Thank you for sharing. I'm also new at writing and feel excited to be able to share and read Christian writing from all over the world.

God bless and keep writing.