The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
AN interesting story which I think would benefit from a little more detail. What happened in hospital? What response did she get when she wrote to the company? Also, try breaking up you writing with some paragraphs and a blank line between them - makes readers feel comfortable.
A thought provoking read, so thank you for sharing it.
This would make a great devotional. Be sure to check your spelling and pay attention to punctuation.
02/26/07
it's good that she realized that she didn't need dangerous drugs. This could easily be polished into a good devotional. Keep writing!