The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/07
This is a great story. I'm hoping it's true.

Watch out for numbers. Any number under 100 should be spelled out. I also felt this would have worked better in short story format, rather than prose form, but that's just my opinion, and not one you have to listen to. :)

Keep writing!
This is absolutely beautiful. It made me cry. How great is our God!!!! It is truely amazing!
02/20/07
A lovely and touching story. I enjoyed reading it. Good work!