The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1054 times
Member Comments
Wow. Lots going on here. Very deep and very interesting. I think if you narrowed it down a little more and expanded on just one part instead of trying to 'cram' so much information into 750 words, it might make it much easier to read. I did enjoy the tone and creavitiy of describing this 'craft' though. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing! ^_^
I liked this a lot - I get it-
I read it more as free verse poetry and found the rhythm - I could here it being preformed in a flash poetry contest. Very intelligent. Thanks
Truthfully, I thought the best bit here was that last sentence--pure and elegant in its simplicity.
Very interesting, very deep! Lots of "food for thought" here! There is much in Scripture that has the appearance of contradiction, yet it is all a part of the whole perfect piece God is crafting. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here!
You definitely gave me much to think about. The last line especially was vibrant and strong.
You put a lot of thought and effort into this. That is evident! Your preface is great. It drew me in. I have to agree that it might be easier to get your point if you narrowed it down, expanding on just one or two examples. I'm glad I read this. You are a skilled wordsmith.
I like it. I also agree your most powerful writing here was your conclusion. God bless.