The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. Lots going on here. Very deep and very interesting. I think if you narrowed it down a little more and expanded on just one part instead of trying to 'cram' so much information into 750 words, it might make it much easier to read. I did enjoy the tone and creavitiy of describing this 'craft' though. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing! ^_^
I liked this a lot - I get it-
I read it more as free verse poetry and found the rhythm - I could here it being preformed in a flash poetry contest. Very intelligent. Thanks
02/21/07
Truthfully, I thought the best bit here was that last sentence--pure and elegant in its simplicity.
02/21/07
Very interesting, very deep! Lots of "food for thought" here! There is much in Scripture that has the appearance of contradiction, yet it is all a part of the whole perfect piece God is crafting. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here!
02/21/07
You definitely gave me much to think about. The last line especially was vibrant and strong.
You put a lot of thought and effort into this. That is evident! Your preface is great. It drew me in. I have to agree that it might be easier to get your point if you narrowed it down, expanding on just one or two examples. I'm glad I read this. You are a skilled wordsmith.
02/21/07
I like it. I also agree your most powerful writing here was your conclusion. God bless.