The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/07
This is a very tender tribute to a legacy passed on through generations. Well done!

A few revisions might improve your second paragraph. Your sentence that begins "As a teenager..." has a misplaced modifier, and the first two sentences of that paragraph begin quite similarly.

I love the conclusion, and could just visualize all those knitting fingers!
02/18/07
A very sweet piece and lovely tribute. Loved the final paragraph especially.