The Official Writing Challenge
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This is interesting but I'm not familiar with all the works you mention so I had a bit of trouble following it. This was somewhat dark but I could see you reaching toward the light. Keep writing!
I liked this. I found it to be refreshingly original! Great job and a fun read. Keep it up - you are gifted.
Actually I didn't just like this - I loved it!
The content of the material is good. I did spot your point right away. I also heard an undulation in your inner voice which led me to waver in the points you were trying to make. I thought well perhaps, the undulation could be your character's dual between her own beliefs about her purity or of her knowledge on being well learned. Either way I detect a voice, stronger in some areas and wavering in other areas.
Very intriguing and well-written piece! It made me think, so I thank you very much! :)